1st expression

My expression - QFC
1) 1 month ago
2) I heard my friend talk about this place when I ask her about food and market.
3) This is an abbreviation or it could also be called an acronym which is a word formed from the first letter of a series of words such as KFC which means Kentucky Fried Chicken.
4) When I arrived to US, I want to find somewhere I can buy food and some thing for me. I asked my friend and she talk about QFC. She explain to me QFC means Quality Food Center.

2nd sentence

My sentence choice - " The following morning - the clean-washed shine of summer mornings in the north country - Mr. Prud'homme stopped at our door". John Knowles wrote it in his novel : A separate peace".

1) Wednesday, October 3, 2007.
2)Novel " A separate peace"
3) It has a objective clause the middle of the sentence.
4) I like it because it shows clearly meaning of the time.
5) My new sentence: The previous night - the rainy day of the east country - I came to my friend's house."

!st sentence

My sentence choice - " It was early afternoon and the grounds and buildings were deserted, since everyone was at sports" . John Knowles wrote in his fiction " A separate peace".

1/. Tuesday, October 2, 2007.
2/. fiction" A separate peace"
3/.It sounds good and it has an adjective clause and adverb of time at the end of sentence.
4/.I like this because it's show time and describe the view at that time so beautiful and lively.
5/. My new sentence: It was winter and the rain was fall down, since I got home.