My sentence choice - " It was early afternoon and the grounds and buildings were deserted, since everyone was at sports" . John Knowles wrote in his fiction " A separate peace".
1/. Tuesday, October 2, 2007.
2/. fiction" A separate peace"
3/.It sounds good and it has an adjective clause and adverb of time at the end of sentence.
4/.I like this because it's show time and describe the view at that time so beautiful and lively.
5/. My new sentence: It was winter and the rain was fall down, since I got home.
1 comment:
Nice sentence choice! Your sentence doesn't parallel your original sentence choice though.
The adverb clause is different than your interpretation. You used a adverb clause that matches a present continuous and tells how long the rain was falling down. However, the original adverb clause tells "why". It explains why the place was deserted. Your new sentence explains how long the rain had been falling down. Totally different.
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